WWW: i think that the pictures fit quite well the compositions ( left= triangles, right= layers), and both of my images are in focus and not blurry.
EBI: For my left photo i could of highlighted the triangle part of the image more as i think that most of the attention is on the top part if the image. |
WWW: I have made 3 clear photographs with the different depth of fields and my subject for the photograph is clear and interesting.
EBI: In 2 of my best edits and also in my slide show, some of the frame are not in focus when they are supposed to, so i should of payed more attention to that and manage it better. |
WWW: I really like the reflection on my window from what is inside my room. There are a couple of different colors in the photo which makes the photo a bit more interesting and contrasting.
EBI: Maybe the room should have been a bit lighter and have a bit more light and maybe a bit sharper. |
WWW: My photo shows a window but also shows how big the sky is from the outside and sort of shows how the window is just a barrier between it and the sky, and it gives a nice, large perspective of the sky from a different angle.
EBI: My photo could of been a lot sharper and i could of fitted the whole window frame in. |
Tone
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Contrast
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Form
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WWW: These bricks stood out to me to be well fitted with the element of tone, as the bricks share roughly the same colour, but each individual brick includes different tones to them.
EBI: I could of included a lot more of this wall in my image to get a wider variety of tones and differentiation. |
WWW: This picture is a picture representing contrast and i think it fits quite well into it as we have shadows from the leaves and branches and then streaks sun coming in between the shadows.
EBI: Maybe next time i could of fitted more of the shadows and light in a bigger photograph/ include more in a photo. |
WWW: I think that the structure of this canvas holder fits reasonably well with the element of form, as the structure of the object seems quite rigid and precise, and this was my aim.
EBI: I could of opened them to further examine and capture the form and structure of it. |
WWW: The green from the trees are very bright, and the green also contrasts with the darker colours in the images of the tree branches.
EBI: I could of found an area with a mix of different colours included. |
WWW: These wooden planks from a bench clearly represent the structure and formal element of lines.
EBI: I could of found a area which is much wider that includes a variation of lines, to increase the diversity in my photo. |
Pattern
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Texture
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WWW: I think I managed to capture a couple of different recurring patterns, such as the curved lines on the roof and the gridded window.
EBI: I could of taken my photograph a bit further away to get more of the recurring patterns in the image. |
WWW: This photo is supposed to represent texture and i also think it fits in quite well as the ripped paper symbolizes texture and we can imagine how it would feel like.
EBI: i could of edited a bit more shadow in the picture to display the rips in the paper more. |
The image on the left was my scan of these flowers without any paper or surface above it, and this allowed more light to enter the scanned photo, therefore making the background very light.
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This is the same image on the left with the same plant positioning, however i placed a piece of A3 black card to stop more light entering the scanner. This impacted greatly the quality of my photo.
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